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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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It's very funny, Twilight Sparkle looks really good, you kept the joke short and simple, I really love the green slime, and I especially love Twilight Sparkle's reaction at the end
However, I do have three complaints.
1. Spike's face in the picture on the top almost looks normal but, Spike's face at the bottom picture looks dumb.
2. Spike's body from the waist up in both the top and bottom pictures that he's in, almost looks like he has no bottom, you could've move the black line on the bottom in both pictures, so it'll look very nice
3. Another thing that you could've done, is to add the library in the background, it would've help made your pictures stand out a WHOLE lot better.
The main problem that I have with this comic, is that do for the fact that there is no background in those two pictures, you'll start to notice more unwanted details
Other why's then that, it's a very fun comic to read
Great job =fr33z3dry, I really loved it
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